Band 6+: Do you often go to cafe?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and provides some details. However, to improve, consider expanding on the types of cafes visited, the frequency of visits beyond birthdays, and perhaps mentioning other reasons for visiting cafes.

The answer is understandable and coherent. However, the phrasing 'whenever a day of my birthday' is slightly awkward and repetitive. Consider rephrasing for better fluency. A more concise and natural way to express this would be 'On my birthday...'

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While 'occasional purpose' is understandable, more precise vocabulary like 'special occasions' or 'celebrations' would enhance the response. The repetition of 'whenever' could also be improved by using more varied vocabulary.

The grammar contains some minor errors. The phrase 'whenever a day of my birthday' is grammatically incorrect. While the meaning is clear, more precise grammatical structures would improve the score. The sentence structure is simple; using more complex sentence structures would demonstrate a wider grammatical range.