Band 6+: do you often use a computer

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a well-developed response. You have successfully categorized your computer usage into two distinct areas: education and leisure, which adds depth to your answer. The use of comparative structures, such as comparing the computer display to a phone, demonstrates a high level of fluency and relevance. To maintain this level, continue to provide specific reasons or examples to support your initial statements.

You answered the question directly and provided relevant reasons (study and leisure), which shows good coherence. However, there is some repetition of ideas and the flow is slightly interrupted by grammatical errors. To improve, try to use more varied cohesive devices beyond 'Additionally' and ensure your sentences flow more naturally without needing to restart thoughts.

You used some appropriate topic-related vocabulary such as 'research', 'online courses', and 'digital textbook'. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and phrasing, such as 'use computers a lot of time' (instead of 'use computers a lot') and 'the display of it more larger'. To reach a higher band, aim for more precise collocations and avoid redundant phrasing.

This is your weakest area. There are several significant grammatical errors: 'because of it allows' (should be 'because it allows'), 'research and about' (incorrect preposition use), 'I'm watching' (incorrect tense for a habitual action; should be 'I watch'), and 'more larger' (double comparative error). You should focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of conjunctions, and mastering comparative structures to improve your score.