Band 6+: Do you prefer to write with a pen or with a pencil now?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

This is a good start to answering the question. Consider expanding on your answer by discussing the different situations where you might choose a pen over a pencil, or perhaps discussing the tactile qualities of each writing instrument. Adding more detail and exploring different aspects of the question will strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor repetition of the word "mistakes" could be avoided for better fluency. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more smoothly.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Instead of "writing without mistakes can be true," consider a more natural expression like "accuracy is important" or "it's important to be accurate." The vocabulary is functional but lacks sophistication.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor error in the phrase "writing without mistakes can be true." The sentence structure is simple but effective. Try incorporating more complex grammatical structures to demonstrate a wider range.