Band 6+: do you share your dreams with others؟

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is understandable and addresses the question. However, expanding on the reasons for keeping dreams private and providing a more detailed example of a dream shared with others would improve the response.

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and unclear phrasing. The structure could be improved by using clearer connectors and a more concise sentence structure. For example, instead of "So, I just talk about my dream," consider "I only discuss my dreams if..." This would improve the flow and coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The phrase "blue moon" is used figuratively, but the explanation is slightly unclear. More precise language would enhance the lexical resource score. Consider replacing "evolve those people" with a clearer expression, such as "involve those people" or "are about those people".

There are several grammatical errors. "I just talk about my dream" should be "I only talk about my dreams." The sentence "One is a blue moon if they evolve those people and I'm really interested in to talk about with them" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.