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Band 5+: Do you think advertising influences what people buy?

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It totally depends on the things we are talking about. When it comes to content, a more effective ad is about what message we want to send to young generations. This is because it can create images, bring in humor, or be on the screen, which can lead to spending a lot of money to buy products.

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It’s totally depends on thing we are talking about. When it comes to containing, a more effective high up at the sizing is on what meaning we want to stand in young generations. It is because that can bring some images, bring the funny factors or it’s on the screen as a result to sustain a lot of money to buy products.

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