Band 5+: Do you think advertising will change in the future?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear opinion. However, the response is somewhat repetitive and relies on circular reasoning (stating it will change because things change). To improve, try to provide specific examples of how advertising might evolve, such as through artificial intelligence, virtual reality, or personalized social media algorithms. Elaborating on the 'how' or 'why' would make the response more substantial and demonstrate a higher level of critical thinking.

The answer is quite short and repetitive. You state that it will change at the beginning and then repeat the same sentiment at the end without adding much depth. To improve, try to expand on *how* it might change (e.g., through AI, virtual reality, or personalized data) rather than just stating that it *will* change. Use more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas.

The vocabulary used is very basic (e.g., 'all things', 'changed many times', 'new forms'). While the meaning is clear, it lacks the precision and sophistication required for higher bands. Instead of 'all things have been changed', you could use 'the landscape is constantly evolving'. Instead of 'new forms', try 'innovative mediums' or 'emerging technologies'.

There are several grammatical inaccuracies. 'All things have been changed' is an awkward passive construction; 'everything changes' or 'everything is constantly evolving' would be more natural. The phrase 'there are new forms of comparison to nowadays' is grammatically confused and doesn't clearly convey your intended meaning. Work on using complex sentence structures and ensuring subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.