Band 6+: Do you think breakfast is important?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it lacks detailed explanation and specific examples to support the claims. Consider expanding on the effects of skipping breakfast and providing more specific examples of how it impacts daily activities.

The answer is understandable, but there are some minor issues with fluency. The phrase 'I think yes' is unnecessary and slightly disrupts the flow. There's also some repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing. Improving the linking words and sentence structure would enhance fluency. For example, instead of 'because when we are not having breakfast it's a harmful in our body,' a more concise and fluent phrasing would be 'because skipping breakfast is harmful to our bodies.'

The vocabulary used is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'harmful' are correctly used, but more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms for 'important' and 'harmful' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. For example, instead of 'harmful,' you could use 'detrimental' or 'damaging.'

There are several grammatical errors. 'my our health' is incorrect; it should be 'our health.' The sentence 'it's a harmful in our body' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it is harmful to our bodies' or 'it harms our bodies.' The use of 'it's effect on our body' is also grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it affects our bodies.' While the message is clear, improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.