Band 5+: do you think hobbies should be shared with other peaole?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a balanced perspective by considering different scenarios. The use of conditional structures ('If the hobby is...', 'if the hobby is...') helps in developing the response logically. To reach a higher level of development, you could provide a specific example of an 'unusual' hobby or further explain why sharing a social hobby makes it more exciting. Overall, the response is relevant and well-structured.

The speaker attempts to structure the answer using a conditional approach ('If...'), which is good for coherence. However, the flow is disrupted by significant hesitation and the use of vague or incorrect phrasing (e.g., 'the former people', 'keep the thread'). To improve, work on using clear cohesive devices like 'On the other hand' or 'Conversely' instead of repetitive structures, and ensure your ideas lead logically to a conclusion.

There is a significant struggle with word choice. The use of 'the former' is contextually incorrect, and 'keep the thread' is a malapropism (likely intended to mean 'keep it to themselves' or 'keep it private'). The word 'strange' is acceptable but 'unusual' or 'niche' would be more precise. You need to build a vocabulary of collocations related to social interaction and personal preferences to avoid using vague terms.

The grammatical structures are limited and contain several errors that impede meaning. For example, 'the people experience become more and more exciting' lacks proper possessive or noun-phrase structure. There are issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence construction. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures (subordinate clauses) and ensuring that your subjects and verbs align correctly.