Band 6+: Do you think it's important to have hobbies?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a reason for the importance of hobbies. To improve, consider expanding on the benefits of hobbies with more specific examples or details.

The answer is somewhat coherent but could be improved. The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be clearer. Try to use conjunctions and linking words to create a smoother flow. For example, you could say, "Hobbies are important because they allow people to relax, which in turn helps them to perform better in both relaxation and work modes."

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. The phrase "Relax mode and focus mode" is not natural. Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary to express your ideas. For example, instead of "Relax mode," you could say "a state of relaxation" or "a relaxed state." Instead of "focus mode," you could say "a state of concentration" or "focused concentration."

There are several grammatical errors in the answer. The plural form "hobbies" should be used instead of "hobby." The sentence structure is also awkward. For example, "people can relax and can do everything" should be "people can relax and do everything." Also, "better than walk, work" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to something like "better than when they are just working." Focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.