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Band 7+: Do you think kids like to share?part 1

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I believe whether children like to share depends largely on how they are raised. If a parent consistently models and teaches the importance of sharing, children are more likely to enjoy it. On the other hand, if parents are too occupied with their busy schedules and don't spend enough time with their children, they might miss the opportunity to instill this value of sharing.

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I believe whether children like sharing depends largely on how they are raised. A parent consistently modele and teach importantance of sharing. Children are more likely to enjoy it. On the other hand, if parents are too occupied with their busy schedules and don’t spend too much time with their children, that might miss the opportunity to instill this value of sharing.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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sharing: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is well-structured and provides a clear and insightful response to the question. The student demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and provides relevant examples to support their point of view. The answer could be slightly improved by providing a more specific example of how parents can model sharing behavior.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is delivered with good fluency and coherence. The student uses appropriate cohesive devices to connect their ideas and the flow of the answer is natural and easy to follow. There is a slight hesitation at the beginning of the answer, but this does not significantly impact the overall fluency.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like "consistently models," "instill this value," and "occupied with their busy schedules." The vocabulary is used accurately and effectively to convey the student's ideas. The student could consider using more specific vocabulary related to sharing, such as "altruism" or "generosity."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer demonstrates good grammatical accuracy. The student uses a variety of grammatical structures, including conditional clauses and complex sentences. There is one minor grammatical error in the sentence "that might miss the opportunity to instill this value of sharing." The student should be encouraged to pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use the correct tense.

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