Band 6+: Do you think people are less committed to goals now than in the past?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and attempts to address it directly. However, the response lacks sufficient generalisation and relies on a single, unsubstantiated statistic. Consider exploring the reasons behind potential shifts in commitment levels, offering a more balanced perspective, and supporting claims with broader evidence or examples.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble in the first sentence ('In my opinion, I would say yes'), which could be improved by simply saying 'Yes, I think so.' The pacing is good, and the ideas flow logically. The reference to the University of Oxford adds credibility, but the statistic could be integrated more smoothly. Consider rephrasing to avoid the slightly abrupt 'But talking about the present time'.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'committed,' 'fulfill,' and 'promise' are used appropriately. However, the phrasing 'They only care about themselves. They don't care about other people' is a bit simplistic and could be replaced with something more nuanced, perhaps focusing on the lack of long-term commitment rather than a lack of care for others. More precise language would elevate the response.

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The sentence 'People in the past are more committed to their goal rather than people are living now' is grammatically incorrect and awkwardly phrased. The tense is inconsistent; the past tense is used in the first part of the sentence, but the present tense is used in the second. The sentence 'Because in the past, people can promise anyone can also fulfill their promise about anything' is also grammatically incorrect. While the message is understandable, improving grammatical accuracy would significantly improve the score.