Band 5+: Do you think people should be tidy all the time?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the question by stating that tidiness is not a necessity and is a matter of choice or upbringing. However, the response becomes unclear and lacks coherence towards the end, with phrases like 'it gives importance to clean lines and other things' and 'leave a leaf just like tidiness' that are difficult to understand. To improve, focus on expressing ideas more clearly and logically, and ensure that each part of the answer directly supports the main point. Elaborating with specific examples or reasons would also strengthen the response.

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks clear organization and logical progression. There is some repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'or it gives importance to clean line and other lines'). The final sentence is unclear and does not effectively conclude the response. To improve, structure your answer with a clear main point, supporting reasons, and a concluding thought. Use cohesive devices like 'for example' or 'in addition' to link ideas.

Vocabulary is adequate but limited and imprecise. Phrases like 'life's necessities' and 'matter of choice' are appropriate, but 'clean line and other lines' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. 'Leave a leaf' is confusing and may be a literal translation. To improve, expand your vocabulary with precise terms (e.g., 'cleanliness,' 'orderliness') and avoid vague expressions. Practice using idiomatic language naturally.

There are several grammatical errors and awkward structures. 'One of the life's necessities' should be 'one of life's necessities' (no article). 'If one is proud by parents' is incorrect; it should be 'if one is raised by parents' or 'if one's parents are proud.' 'Most probably one will be tidy or it gives importance' is a run-on sentence with unclear subject-verb agreement. The final sentence is grammatically incomplete. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct prepositions, and sentence structure. Practice forming complex sentences with subordinate clauses.