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Band 6+: Do you think people should return to their hometowns after finishing school or university?

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It depends on individual circumstances. If someone has ample job opportunities in their hometown, returning after finishing school makes sense. However, if their hometown lacks sufficient career prospects, staying in the city where they studied might be more beneficial. Ultimately, the decision should be based on factors like career goals, personal preferences, and the availability of opportunities in both locations.

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According to many people should return to their hometowns if they have enough job opportunities in their hometown, because if you are, uh, relating to a city that is not a big enough for the job opportunities, so you should go back to. You should not go back to their hometown. And if you don’t have enough, uh, job opportunities, and if you are getting job in, uh, where you studied, so I think you should, uh, stay there and continue your job for your career and for your future.

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Task Response

The answer is somewhat relevant to the question, but it lacks clarity and focus. The student struggles to articulate a clear opinion and instead focuses on the availability of job opportunities. A stronger answer would have explored the benefits and drawbacks of returning to one's hometown, considering factors beyond just employment.

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The answer is somewhat disjointed and lacks a clear structure. The student uses fillers like 'uh' and repeats themselves, making the flow of the answer choppy. The student could improve fluency by planning their response and using more cohesive devices to connect their ideas.

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The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or precisely. For example, 'relating to a city' is not a common phrase. The student could improve their lexical resource by using more specific and appropriate vocabulary.

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The answer contains grammatical errors, particularly in the use of tenses and subject-verb agreement. For example, 'if you are, uh, relating to a city' is grammatically incorrect. The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying more attention to sentence structure and verb conjugation.

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