Band 7+: Do you think people today are less willing to help others compared to the past?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear opinion. It supports the opinion with a comparison between past and present behaviors. To improve, consider providing more specific examples or elaborating on the reasons behind the shift in people's willingness to help.

The response is generally coherent and easy to follow. The ideas are connected, but the development could be a bit more elaborate. Consider adding more specific examples or expanding on the reasons why technology and wealth might lead to less willingness to help others. Also, avoid ending abruptly; a concluding sentence would improve coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'essential,' 'advanced,' and 'wealth' are used correctly. To improve, try incorporating more varied and nuanced vocabulary related to altruism, societal changes, or human behavior. For example, instead of 'help each other,' you could use 'support one another' or 'offer mutual aid.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The sentence 'In ancient times, we can see people help each other by providing them some essential foods' could be improved to 'In ancient times, we saw people helping each other by providing essential food.' Pay attention to verb tense consistency and pronoun usage. Overall, the grammatical structures are relatively simple; try incorporating more complex sentences to demonstrate a wider range.