Band 6+: Do you think technology has changed the way we communicate?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides a clear opinion with some elaboration. It mentions specific examples (messages, video calls, landlines, letters) and contrasts past and present communication methods. To improve, you could develop the ideas further by adding more specific details or examples, and ensure a more natural flow by using linking words and varied sentence structures. Additionally, consider discussing both positive and negative aspects in more depth to show a balanced view.

The answer is coherent and logically organized, with a clear structure: introduction, contrast between past and present, and a concluding point. However, there are some hesitations and repetitions (e.g., 'the technology', 'the people') that slightly disrupt fluency. The use of cohesive devices like 'But' and 'However' is appropriate, but the flow could be smoother with more varied linking phrases.

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant to the topic, with words like 'landlines', 'letters', 'plus point', and 'less personal'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'communication' used multiple times) and a lack of more precise or varied vocabulary. To improve, consider using synonyms like 'interaction', 'correspondence', or 'digital platforms' to demonstrate a wider range.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors: 'the technology' should be 'technology' (no article), 'the people' should be 'people' (no article), and 'the people use' should be 'people used' (past tense consistency). The sentence 'So it's a very difficult path of communication' is slightly awkward; 'which was a very difficult means of communication' would be more natural. Overall, the range of structures is limited, with mostly simple and compound sentences.