Band 7+: do you think technology has improved communication

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the positive and negative impacts of technology on communication for a more comprehensive response. Adding specific examples of technologies and their effects would strengthen the answer.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The ideas flow logically. Minor improvements could be made by slightly smoothing out the phrasing in the first sentence. For example, instead of 'have us to keep contact', a more natural phrasing would be 'and keep in contact' or 'and maintain contact with'.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "platforms" and "translation apps" show good range. However, more precise vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'make friends with everyone', a more nuanced expression could be used, such as 'connect with people from all over the world'.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor error ('have us to keep contact'). The sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as subordinate clauses, would enhance the response. For example, the second sentence could be improved by adding a subordinate clause to show the cause-and-effect relationship more clearly.