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Band 5+: Do you think that some sports people are paid too much money ?

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In my opinion, sports people are not getting enough money because they represent their country at the international level. They have to meet many requirements and show their performance. If they are paid well, they can focus more on their performance and be happy with what the government provides them, allowing them to show their full skills in their tasks, which benefits the country.

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In my opinion, the sports people are getting not much money because they represent your country at international level. So they have to receive many requirements and show their performance. So if they are paid with well-money, they have more focus on their performance and they are happy with the things that government provided them and show their 100% full skills to their task and that’s benefit to the country.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

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