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Band 5+: Do you think that some sports people are paid too much money ?

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It depends on the player. If a player is famous and has an advantage, I think they can earn a lot of money from their club. For instance, Ronaldo or Messi can earn a lot from their clubs. If a player is not famous, I think they can still earn a decent amount, but they won't make as much as the top players.

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It depends on player if it’s this player it’s famous and this player it’s high and have advantage I think they can get a lot of money from club for instance like Ronaldo or Messi they can get a lot of money from his club if it’s player do not do not famous I think they can do a lot of money and just player

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player: 3

they: 3

earn: 3

famous: 2

think: 2

their: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a reasonable response. However, it could be improved by providing a more in-depth discussion of the factors that contribute to high salaries in sports, such as the economic impact of the sport, the player's marketability, and the overall financial health of the team. A more general discussion, rather than focusing on specific players, would also strengthen the response.

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The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There's some repetition and self-correction. Work on smoother transitions between ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition. Practice speaking at a more consistent pace.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Words like "high" and "advantage" are a bit vague. Try to use more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to describe the factors influencing player salaries. For example, instead of 'high', you could use 'highly skilled' or 'exceptionally talented'.

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Grammar is inconsistent. There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect use of articles and tense. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles (a, an, the). Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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