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Band 7+: Do you think that some sports people are paid too much money ?

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I am not sure about that. On the one hand, these people have particular and special skills, and the market actually decides on prices depending on the interest from the people. So that is not entirely up to just one person. However, on the other hand, they have really high salaries, and I cannot even imagine how it feels to earn that much money. Honestly, there could be some alternative ways to use that money other than giving it to sportspeople. But yeah, I am not sure about that.

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I am not sure about that. On the one hand these people have particular and special skills and market actually decide on prices depending on the interest from the people. So that is not entirely up to just one person. However, on the other hand they have really high salaries and I cannot even imagine how it feels to earn that much money. And honestly there could be some alternative ways to use that money other than giving it to sports people. But yeah, I am not sure about that.

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people: 2

other: 2

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and presents a balanced discussion. However, it lacks depth in exploring the reasons behind high salaries and alternative uses of the money. More specific examples and a clearer conclusion would strengthen the response.

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