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Band 6+: Do you think tourism affects natural places negatively?

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I really think tourism affects natural places negatively. Tourism adds some things and changes some things in natural places. For example, waterfalls. People go to waterfalls to enjoy and watch them, but they might throw trash into them. This can cause pollution. Tourism destroys natural places by adding some things and changing them. Nature is nature, and we can't change it. It should be itself. If we change nature, some bad things like climate change could happen in the future in return to us. So, in my opinion, we should start doing that.

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I really think tourism affects natural places negatively. Tourism add some things and changes some things in natural places. For example, waterfalls. People go to waterfalls to enjoy and to watch it, but they might throw trash into it. This might cause pollution. Tourism destroys natural places by adding some things and changing them. Nature is nature and we can’t change it. It should be itself. If we change nature, some bad things like climate change could happen in the future in return to us. So in my opinion we should start doing that.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

some: 4

things: 4

tourism: 3

natural: 3

places: 3

them: 3

nature: 3

change: 3

waterfalls: 2

should: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of negative impacts of tourism. However, it lacks a broader discussion of the issue and the explanation is not fully developed. Consider exploring a wider range of impacts and providing more detailed examples to support your points. The conclusion could be strengthened by summarizing the main points and offering a more concise and impactful statement.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. There is a slight hesitation and repetition ('some things and changes some things'), but overall the flow is smooth. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the coherence, such as 'furthermore,' 'moreover,' or 'consequently'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'pollution' and 'climate change' demonstrate a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to elevate the response. For example, instead of 'adds some things and changes some things,' consider using phrases like 'introduces artificial elements' or 'alters the natural ecosystem'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors ('add' instead of 'adds', 'them' instead of 'it'). The sentence structures are relatively simple. While the message is clear, incorporating more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, would improve the score. The concluding sentence is abrupt and could be improved by stating a specific action or solution.

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