Band 6+: Do you want to be a singer ?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear reason for the answer. Consider expanding on the reasoning to further illustrate your point and make the response more engaging.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some slight hesitation and unnatural phrasing ("it's no"), but the overall message is clear. Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions and more natural sentence structures. Consider pausing slightly more strategically between ideas.

Vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. The choice of "sociology" seems slightly off; perhaps "society" or "the public" would be more precise. While the vocabulary is understandable, using more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence "it is very hard to me" should be "it is very hard for me." The use of "every my action" is grammatically incorrect; consider rephrasing to "every action I take." While the errors are minor, improving grammatical accuracy will improve the overall score.