Band 6+: Do you want to learn more about art?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a reason for the lack of interest in art. The answer could be improved by providing more specific details or examples to support the statements made.

The response is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and a bit of rambling. The structure could be improved by providing a clearer reason upfront and then elaborating. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I'm not interested in art anymore.' Instead, vary your language and provide more specific reasons. For example, you could say, 'I don't have much time for art because of my studies,' and then explain further.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or precise. The phrase 'put a lot of efforts on my Economics' is not quite natural. Consider using 'put a lot of effort into my economics studies.' Also, 'shootings' is a bit vague; specify what kind of shooting you are interested in (e.g., photography, target shooting). To improve, try to use more specific and descriptive words related to your interests.

There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. 'Due to my academic' should be 'due to my academics' or 'because of my academic workload.' The sentence structure is a bit repetitive. The phrase 'rather than these are both' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be something like 'rather than those, I'm more interested in shooting.' Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring correct grammar.