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Band 7+: Does fashion change for people as they get older?

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I think yes. When we are children, our parents control the way we dress and the way we look. But as we grow older, we might be influenced by the people around us and by celebrities. For example, we might wear dresses as young girls, but as we grow up, we switch to something more practical, and we consider it fashion, such as jeans, whether as bottoms or jackets.

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I think yes when we are children our parents control the way we dress and the way we look but as we grow older I think we might be influenced by the people around us and by celebrities so for example we might wear dresses as young girls but as we grow up we will switch to something more practical and we would consider it fashion such as jeans whether as bottoms or jackets

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples. However, further development of ideas and more specific examples would strengthen the response. Consider exploring different aspects of how fashion choices evolve with age, such as changes in style preferences, budget, and lifestyle.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. There's a natural flow of ideas. Minor improvements could be made by pausing slightly more between sentences for better pacing and emphasis. The occasional run-on sentence could be broken up for clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the nuances of fashion changes. For example, instead of 'switch to something more practical,' consider using phrases like 'transition to more functional attire' or 'adopt a more utilitarian style'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The sentence structure is simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would enhance the answer. For example, instead of 'we might wear dresses as young girls, but as we grow up we will switch,' consider 'As young girls, we might wear dresses; however, as we mature, we tend to transition to...'.

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