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Band 5+: does you live in have many amenities

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Admittedly, it doesn't have all the amenities required by my family members. Also, it has a big garden and every room for all my family members. But it lacks certain facilities like coal, which is needed to burn the stove for heating in the winter. Additionally, electricity is one of the big problems in my house because in the countryside, there is still a lot of a lack of electricity.

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Admittedly, it doesn’t have all the amenities which is acquired by my family members. Also, it has got a big garden and, um, every room, every single room for all my family members. But it lacks Syh facilities like, um, the coal, which is needed to burn. Burn the stove, you know, to be heated in the winterter. And so that. And electricity is also the one of the big problems of this, of my house, because in the countryside, there is still a lot of a like of the electricity.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

family: 2

members: 2

electricity: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

4.5

The response is relevant to the prompt and provides some details about the amenities available and lacking in the speaker's home. However, to improve, the answer could benefit from more specific examples and a more detailed explanation of the impact of the missing amenities on daily life. Expanding on the challenges posed by the lack of coal and electricity would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ("um", "you know", "And so that"). Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions and reducing filler words. The structure is generally coherent, but could benefit from more concise phrasing.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "amenities" and "facilities" are used appropriately, but more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Consider replacing phrases like "a lot of a lack of electricity" with more concise and natural expressions like "frequent power outages" or "unreliable electricity supply".

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are some grammatical errors, such as "which is acquired by my family members" (consider "required by"), and "winterter." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would involve using more complex sentence structures and avoiding grammatical errors.

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