Band 6+: Early marriage or late marriage

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and touches upon both early and late marriage. However, it lacks detailed explanation and specific examples to support the claims made. Consider providing more specific reasons why early or late marriage might be advantageous or disadvantageous, and illustrate your points with examples from your own experience or observations.

The answer is understandable, but the ideas are not very well organized. There's a lack of clear comparison between early and late marriage. The phrasing 'when two individuals wrinkle in their life together' is awkward and needs rewording. Improving the structure and transitions between ideas would significantly improve fluency and coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not sophisticated. Words like 'wrinkle' are misused. More precise and nuanced vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'very fun for the moment,' a more descriptive phrase could be used. The word 'degrees' is inappropriate in this context and needs to be replaced with a more suitable word or phrase.

There are several grammatical errors. 'It's degrees, divorces' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would improve the score. Consider using more varied sentence structures and paying attention to subject-verb agreement.