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Band 5+: Everyone should have hobby

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In today's society, everyone should have a hobby. There are several advantages to it. Firstly, when people engage in hobbies, it promotes equality among them and avoids social stratification. Secondly, if everyone has a hobby, it reduces stress and peer pressure. Finally, when they pursue their interests, it helps to save time in the day. When individuals spend their time on hobbies, they feel more fulfilled. However, there are some downsides to it.

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In today’s society, school uniform should be worn by student. There are several advantages of it. Firstly, when all students wear the same uniform, it promotes equality among them and avoids social stratification. Secondly, if all pupils at school wear the same clothes, it reduces destruction and peer pressure. Finally, when they wear the same clothes, it helps to save their money in the morning. When pupils spend their time choosing clothes, they wear the same clothes. However, there are some bits of it.

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everyone: 2

hobby: 2

there: 2

hobbies: 2

their: 2

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