Band 6+: Has your hometown changed much these years？

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides several relevant points of change, such as infrastructure, architecture, and demographics. To reach a higher level of development, consider using more descriptive language or specific examples to illustrate these changes. For instance, instead of just saying buildings have been modernized, you could mention the transition from traditional houses to high-rise apartments. Additionally, while the use of cohesive devices like 'additionally' and 'moreover' is grammatically correct, integrating them more naturally into the flow of speech would make the response sound less like a list and more like a natural conversation.

You use cohesive devices like 'Additionally' and 'Moreover' effectively to link your ideas, which helps the flow. However, the final sentence becomes repetitive and circular ('due to a noise level, leading to increase of noise level'), which disrupts the logical progression of your thought. To improve, ensure that each sentence adds new information rather than repeating the same concept.

You have used some good collocations such as 'undergone significant changes' (though grammatically slightly off in the raw version) and 'increased considerably.' However, the misuse of 'noise level' at the end of the response shows a lack of precision. Instead of repeating 'noise level,' you could use synonyms or related terms like 'urban congestion,' 'commotion,' or 'increased density.'

There are several grammatical errors in the raw transcript that affect the score. Specifically, 'my hometown undergone' should be 'has undergone' (Present Perfect), and 'significantly changes' should be 'significant changes' (adjective vs. adverb). Additionally, the phrase 'due to a noise level, leading to increase of noise level' is grammatically redundant and logically flawed. Focus on mastering the Present Perfect tense for describing changes over time.