Band 8+: Have you ever worked before?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is concise, natural, and directly addresses the question. The candidate provides relevant details about their work experience without unnecessary elaboration. The answer flows well and demonstrates good fluency.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The slight repetition of "at the restaurant" could be avoided for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow, such as 'Furthermore,' or 'In addition to'.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the context. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe the work experience. For example, instead of 'cook,' you could use 'chef' or 'line cook,' depending on the role. Using more precise language will elevate your score.

The grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence structure is simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures, such as subordinate clauses, would demonstrate a wider grammatical range.