Band 7+: Have you ever worked before?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the prompt and covers the question adequately. Consider providing more details about the jobs and experiences to enhance the response further.

The answer is generally fluent and coherent. The use of discourse markers like "Firstly" and "After that" helps structure the response. However, there's a slight jump between the two jobs, which could be smoother with a connecting phrase like "seeking a better experience."

The vocabulary is adequate and conveys the message clearly. Words like "underrated" and "choreographer" are well-chosen. Consider using more sophisticated vocabulary to describe the job experiences, such as "demanding" instead of "dirty" or "fulfilling" instead of "good."

There are a few grammatical errors, particularly with tense consistency (switching between present and past tenses). Ensure correct tense usage: "worked" instead of "work." Also, "for approximately 2 years" is more grammatically accurate than "in that job I work approximately 2 years."