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Band 5+: How are elderly people treated in your country?

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In Mongolia, elderly people are internationally respected and cared for by their families. However, in cities like Lombard, some older people live alone, and support can be limited.

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In Mongolia, 8th Street people are internationally respected and cared for by their families. However, in cities like Lombard, some older people live and alone and support can only meet it.

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a general overview of how elderly people are treated in Mongolia. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons behind the differences in treatment between urban and rural areas, and providing more specific examples to support your points. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, but there's a slight awkwardness in the transition between the general statement about Mongolia and the specific example of cities like Lombard. To improve, ensure smoother transitions between ideas and provide more context to connect the points being made.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using 'internationally respected' is a bit unusual; consider alternatives like 'highly respected' or 'revered'. Also, 'support can only meet it' is vague. Try to use more specific vocabulary to convey the intended meaning more clearly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical issues. '8th Street people' should be 'elderly people'. Also, 'support can only meet it' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be something like 'support can be limited'. Focus on accurate sentence construction and correct word usage.

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