Part 3

Band 6+: how can corruption and bribery eradicate?

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There are an extended range of activities that authorities can implement to reduce the corruption rate in society. For example, they can impose heavy penalties for offenders, and they can arrest them or lay them off from work. Beyond this, I think that algorithms can oversee certain new policies to monitor the workers strictly to reduce and control corruption and misbehavior in the administration.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Uh, there are an extended range of activities that authorities can implement to reduce the corruption rate in society. For example, they canut heavy penalties for offenders and they can arrest them or um, or lay um, layout them from the work. Beyond this, I think that algorithues, um, can oversee, can certain new policies to oversee and monitor, monitor the worker tr to strictly to reduce and control the corruption and misbehavior in the administration.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

reduce: 2

corruption: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the suggested solutions with more detail and examples. Exploring preventative measures, such as promoting transparency and accountability, would strengthen the response further.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few noticeable hesitations ('uh', 'um'), and some slightly awkward phrasing ('layout them from the work'). Smoother delivery and more precise word choices would improve fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'extended range of activities' and 'impose heavy penalties' show a good range. However, 'algorithues' is misspelled, and the phrasing could be more precise in places. More sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices would enhance this aspect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains some errors. 'They canut heavy penalties' is incorrect. The sentence structure is sometimes a bit clumsy. While the student attempts complex sentence structures, accuracy needs improvement. Focusing on grammatical accuracy and sentence structure will significantly improve the score.

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