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Band 6+: how can parents teach children to protect nature?

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Personally, I think that first of all, parents should teach the rules of society and the government, which can be complicated. Children will gain knowledge about protecting nature and will become interested in improving it. So, I believe parents should teach the laws set by the higher levels of government. That's why I think this is the best way to teach children how to protect nature.

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Personally I think that pavements first of all they should teach the rules of the society, of the government which is really complicated and children will take some knowledge about protecting their nature, to improve their nature, they will be interested in. So I think the parents should teach the laws of the government, which is put by the high places government. So that’s why I think this is the best way to teach children how to protect the nature.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

teach: 3

think: 2

parents: 2

should: 2

government: 2

children: 2

nature: 2

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Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant to the question but lacks depth and specific examples. The idea of teaching children about environmental laws is mentioned, but it's not fully developed or explained how this translates into practical action. To improve, provide more concrete examples of how parents can educate their children about nature protection and expand on the reasoning behind your suggestions.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('of the government' repeated). The connection between teaching societal rules and protecting nature isn't clearly established, making the argument a bit difficult to follow. To improve, focus on making clearer connections between ideas and reducing unnecessary repetition. Use cohesive devices more effectively to guide the listener through your reasoning.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. Words like 'complicated,' 'knowledge,' and 'interested' are used, but the range is limited. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to environmental protection and education. For example, instead of 'protecting nature,' you could use 'conservation,' 'environmental stewardship,' or 'sustainable practices.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are some awkward phrasings and a lack of complex sentence structures. For example, 'pavements first of all they should teach' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses, and pay attention to word order and subject-verb agreement. Review basic grammar rules to avoid simple errors.

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