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Band 6+: How can societies effectively address the growing gap between the rich and the poor?

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This year, there is a growing gap between the rich and the poor. I think society can address these problems by giving equal opportunities to the poor as compared to rich people and providing support or help for the poor through financial or psychological means so that they can grow faster.

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This year is a growing gap between rich and poor. I think society can address these problems by giving equal opportunity to poor as well are compared to reach people and providing a support or help for the poor by financial or psychological ways so that they can grow more faster.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and offers some relevant suggestions. However, elaborating on the types of equal opportunities and specific financial or psychological support mechanisms would strengthen the answer. Providing more detailed examples or discussing the potential impact of these measures could further enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and a slightly awkward phrasing ('as well are compared to reach people'). Improving sentence structure and reducing pauses would enhance fluency. Focus on using clearer transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using synonyms for 'help' and 'support' could add more depth. For example, consider using 'assistance' or 'resources'. Also, 'psychological ways' could be refined to 'psychological support' or 'mental health resources'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors, such as 'This year is a growing gap' (should be 'there is a growing gap') and 'poor as well are compared to reach people' (should be 'poor as compared to rich people'). While the overall meaning is clear, correcting these errors would improve the grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct word order.

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