Band 6+: How did you celebrate your last birthday?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is quite good and covers all aspects of the question. To improve, consider adding more detail and descriptive language to paint a more vivid picture of the celebration. For example, you could describe the food at the restaurant, the specific activities in the park, or the emotions you felt during the celebration.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are several instances of unnatural phrasing and abrupt transitions. Improving sentence structure and using smoother connectors would enhance coherence. For example, instead of 'After celebrate parties and go to the park,' try 'After the restaurant, we went to the park for some fun.'

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the answer conveys the message, using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'enjoyment,' use a more descriptive word like 'relaxation' or 'recreation.' The phrase 'number of gifted my friends and relatives' is grammatically incorrect and needs rephrasing.

Grammatical errors are present, impacting the overall accuracy. The sentence structure is often fragmented and lacks grammatical precision. For example, 'I surprised my big brother gave me iPhone' is incorrect. It should be 'I was surprised when my big brother gave me an iPhone.' Focusing on correct sentence structure and tense consistency will significantly improve the score.