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Band 7+: How do advancements in communication technology affect interpersonal relationships and social interactions?

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Well, with the rise of communication technology, families and friends can connect conveniently. They can use their smartphones to meet with their friends and family members. They can share a lot of things through these technological devices, which can positively affect their emotional connection and boost their bond with each other. For instance, if I want to talk with a family member, I can call my dad and talk with him conveniently. This helps me feel relaxed while studying.

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Well, with the rise of communication technology, families and friends can reach conveniently. They can use their smartphone to meet with their friends and family members. They can share a lot of things from these technological devices and it can positively affect to their emotional connection and it can boost their bond with each other. For instance, if I want to talk with my family member, I can call my dad and I can talk with him conveniently. helps me to feel relaxed while studying for my studies.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

with: 5

their: 4

friends: 2

conveniently: 2

family: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but relies heavily on personal experience rather than providing a broader perspective on the impact of communication technology on interpersonal relationships and social interactions. To improve, consider discussing both the positive and negative effects on a societal level, providing more general examples and insights.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on using more natural connectors and avoiding unnecessary repetition. For example, instead of saying 'They can use their smartphone to meet with their friends and family members,' try 'They can easily connect with friends and family using smartphones.' This streamlines the sentence and makes it more fluent.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The word 'conveniently' is overused. Try to incorporate synonyms or more descriptive words to enhance the response. For example, instead of 'reach conveniently,' consider 'easily connect' or 'communicate effortlessly.' Expanding your vocabulary range will make your answers more engaging and demonstrate a higher level of proficiency.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors, such as 'affect to their emotional connection' (should be 'affect their emotional connection'). Pay attention to preposition usage and subject-verb agreement. Review common grammatical errors and practice constructing more complex sentences to improve accuracy and demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures.

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