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Band 6+: How do advertisements influence people to buy things?

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Well, some people are not the loyal customers of the brand, so they don't know much about the brand or the products. Through advertisements, they learn more about the brand name and the products. Moreover, some brands promote their products through advertisements. This way, the brands lure customers to believe in them and decide to buy their items.

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Well, some people, they are not the royal customer from the brand, so they don’t know much more about the brand and also the products. So to the advertisement, they will know more about the brand name and also the products. moreover some brand they accurate their product through the advertisement. So the brand lure customer to believe in them and decided to buy their items.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

brand: 3

products: 3

customers: 2

about: 2

through: 2

advertisements: 2

brands: 2

their: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant information about how advertisements influence people's purchasing decisions. The answer could be strengthened by providing more specific examples or elaborating on the psychological techniques used in advertising to persuade consumers.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but contains some hesitations and reformulations. The ideas are generally connected, but the flow could be smoother with better use of cohesive devices. Try to minimize pauses and 'filler' words like 'well' and 'so'. Practice speaking more continuously on a variety of topics to improve fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'royal customer' is not idiomatic; 'loyal customer' is more appropriate. The word 'accurate' is misused; 'promote' or 'showcase' would be better choices. Expand your vocabulary by reading widely and noting down useful words and phrases in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains grammatical errors, such as incorrect article usage ('to the advertisement' should be 'through advertisements') and verb tense issues ('brand they accurate' should be 'brands promote'). There are also issues with sentence structure. Focus on mastering basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Review articles, verb tenses, and subject-verb agreement.

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