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Band 7+: How do children become smart at school?

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If teachers are professionals, they can make children smart. For example, if they take care of them and explain information in an easy and understandable way, this could help children put more effort into improving their mentality and brain. Another situation could be if learning art-related subjects is included in school. I think this can really enhance the mentality of children by focusing on not just scientific subjects, but also on exploring their potential.

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If teachers are professionals, they can make children smart. For example, if they took care of them, if they explained information in an easy and understandable way, this could help children to put more effort into improving their mentality and brain. Another situation could be if learning art-related subjects is included in school. I think this can really enhance the mentality of children by focusing on not just scientific subjects, but also on exploding their potentials.

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children: 3

could: 2

their: 2

mentality: 2

subjects: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points. However, it could benefit from a broader range of factors and a more in-depth discussion of how these factors contribute to children's academic success. Consider exploring other elements such as the role of parental involvement, the child's intrinsic motivation, and the learning environment.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. There is a slight stumble in the phrasing at the end of the first sentence, and the second sentence could be more concise. Minor repetition of 'children' could be avoided by using pronouns more effectively. Overall, the ideas flow logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "mentality" are used, but could be replaced with more precise terms like "cognitive abilities" or "intellectual development" for a more sophisticated effect. The word "exploding" is slightly inappropriate; "exploring" would be better.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The conditional sentences are well-formed, but the phrasing in the first sentence ("If they took care") is grammatically incorrect. The final sentence has a slight grammatical error ("exploding their potentials"). More varied sentence structures would improve the score.

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