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Band 6+: How do people express happiness in your culture?

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First of all, it is important to mention that due to many problems, including economic issues in my country, some people can't express their happiness. However, in our culture, we have many feelings, and people express their happiness through dance or by talking to others.

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First of all it is important to mention due to many problems, economic problems in my country, some people can’t express their happiness. But in our culture we have a lot of feelings, which in this culture people have dance and express their happiness with dance or talking to other people.

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Task Response

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. The sentence 'But in our culture we have a lot of feelings, which in this culture people have dance and express their happiness with dance or talking to other people' is grammatically awkward and could be restructured for clarity and improved grammatical range. Using more complex sentence structures would improve the score.

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