Band 6+: How do strangers influence our lives?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question directly, focusing on the influence of strangers through social media. It provides a clear general perspective rather than personal anecdotes, which is appropriate for Part 3. The response is well-developed with an example and a balanced view of positive and negative influences. To improve, you could expand on other contexts where strangers influence us (e.g., in public spaces, through random interactions) and perhaps elaborate on the mechanisms of influence. Additionally, ensure that the language is precise and varied, and avoid minor grammatical slips like 'can extremely affect' (should be 'can greatly affect' or 'can have a significant impact on').

The answer is coherent and logically organized, with a clear introduction, examples, and a concluding point. However, there are noticeable repetitions ('start a new hobby start a new hobby') and a few self-corrections ('the furthermore', 'will be a result in negatively') that disrupt the flow. To improve, practice speaking more smoothly and avoid repeating phrases. Use cohesive devices more naturally, such as 'moreover' or 'in addition,' and ensure transitions are seamless.

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some good collocations ('constantly exposed,' 'content creators,' 'daily routines,' 'genuinely interested'). However, there are errors in word choice and form ('mind sense' instead of 'mindset,' 'carrier' instead of 'career,' 'content digital' instead of 'digital content'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct word order and collocations. Expand your range by using synonyms and more sophisticated terms where appropriate.

The answer demonstrates a reasonable range of structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses. However, there are several grammatical errors that affect accuracy: 'can extremely affect' should be 'can extremely affect' (adverb placement is acceptable but could be improved), 'will be a result in negatively' is incorrect and should be 'will result in negativity,' and 'the furthermore' is an error. To improve, focus on using correct verb patterns and prepositions, and avoid mixing structures. Practice producing error-free sentences with a variety of tenses and clauses.