Band 5+: how do you decide which clothes to buy?(why?)

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question by providing several relevant criteria for purchasing clothes, such as quality, comfort, and fit. However, the final sentence regarding clothes being 'according to the law' is somewhat unusual in the context of personal fashion choices and lacks clarity or logical connection to the preceding points. To improve, ensure that all supporting details directly relate to the personal decision-making process. Additionally, expanding on the 'why' aspect for each point would help create a more cohesive and well-developed response.

You organized your answer logically using discourse markers like 'Firstly' and 'Secondly,' which helps the flow. However, the coherence is slightly hindered by some confusing phrasing at the end. To improve, ensure that your concluding sentence relates logically to the topic; saying you prefer clothes 'according to the law' is a bit nonsensical in this context and breaks the logical flow of the response.

You attempted to use higher-level vocabulary such as 'durability,' 'craftsmanship,' and 'prioritize.' However, there were significant errors in word choice and usage. For example, you used 'access' instead of 'assess,' and 'gloves' instead of 'clothes.' Additionally, the phrase 'according to the law' is used incorrectly here. Aim to use collocations more naturally (e.g., 'flattering fit' instead of 'clothes that are flatter my body').

You used a mix of simple and complex structures, but there were frequent grammatical errors that affected clarity. Errors included 'to ensuring' (should be 'to ensure'), 'fabric stay last' (should be 'fabric lasts'), and 'those clothes that are flatter' (should be 'clothes that flatter'). Work on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of infinitive phrases to increase your accuracy.