Band 4+: How do you remember important things?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is brief and does not fully address how the speaker remembers important things. Consider explaining specific memory techniques or strategies used to recall important events. Elaborating on the connection between the birthday party and football event and how they are memorable would improve the response.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but lacks detail and organization. The connection between a birthday party and a football event isn't clear. Improving fluency involves planning your response before speaking and using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly. Try to elaborate on why these events are memorable.

Vocabulary is basic. While understandable, more precise and sophisticated language would improve the score. Instead of 'unforgettable memory,' consider using synonyms like 'cherished memory' or 'vivid recollection.' Try to use more descriptive words to paint a picture of the events.

Grammatical errors are present ('unforgettable memory because it is very important with me' should be 'unforgettable memory because it is very important to me'). The sentence structure is simple. Practice using more complex sentence structures, such as relative clauses and participial phrases, to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.