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Band 6+: how do you think childrens activity will change in future

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Yes, certainly. I'm sure most people would agree that there will be a number of major changes related to children's activities in the future. We might see a gap in products that engage children in virtual activities. They could make new friends on online platforms, chat, or play games to stay entertained at home. There are pros and cons to this change, as children may not need to move around as much.

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Yes. Certainly. I’m sure that most people would agree that there will a number of major changes related to this. Product gaps that we might begin to see, uh, children’s, uh, that are, engaging virtual activities. They, make making new friends on the platform, online platform, or chatting or playing games to stay at home, play games. Yeah. Their pros and cons of, uh, this change because, uh, they don’t need to move to

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activities: 2

children: 2

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Task Response

The student provides a relevant answer, but it lacks depth and detail. They mention virtual activities and making friends online, but they don't elaborate on the specific changes or the impact on children's development. They could have explored the potential benefits and drawbacks of increased screen time, the role of technology in education, or the importance of physical activity.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and disjointed, with several fillers and repetitions. The ideas are not always presented in a logical order, and the transitions between them are not smooth. The student could improve their fluency by practicing speaking more spontaneously and using connecting words to link their ideas.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some of it is not precise or appropriate. For example, "product gaps" is not a common phrase, and "stay at home, play games" is repetitive. The student could expand their vocabulary by reading more and using a dictionary or thesaurus to find more specific and accurate words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student makes a few grammatical errors, such as "there will a number of" and "they don't need to move to." They also use some awkward phrasing, such as "make making new friends." The student could improve their grammar by reviewing basic sentence structures and practicing using different tenses and verb forms.

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