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Band 6+: How do you think technological advancements will reshape the concept of 'community' in the coming decades?

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Personally, I think technological advancements will shape the community into a more digital base. It would be based on applications, with everything connected through the internet. For example, even now, compared to several years ago, communities have already changed. The concept of community several years ago was more about person-to-person, face-to-face interactions. People would go to certain places or gather in one location based on their occasion, whether for a meeting, a chat, or a discussion, and they did it directly, face-to-face. Now, many communities are really based on apps. For example, recently, there is an app called Reak Club for the tennis community, so rather than they...

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Personally, I think technological advancement will shape the community into more digital base. So it would be based on an application. everything was connected through internet. For example, even now compared to several years ago, community already changed. So the concept of the community several years ago more like person to person face-to-face directly so they went to some places or they gather on one places based on their occasion either for a meeting for a cheat chat or for a discussion etc and they do it directly face-to-face mostly now more of the community they’re really based on apps like for example recently there is an app called Reak Club for tennis community so rather than they

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The response addresses the question and provides some relevant points about the impact of technology on community. However, the answer could be more fully developed and provide a broader perspective beyond just apps. Consider exploring other aspects of technological advancements and their potential effects on community dynamics. The response also veers into personal examples, which should be avoided in Part 3.

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