Band 6+: How do you think your hometown will change in the future? (Why/Why not?)

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some details about the new school. However, to achieve a higher score, it would be beneficial to elaborate more on other potential changes and provide more specific reasons for those changes. Consider discussing aspects beyond the new school, such as infrastructure development, population growth, or economic shifts, and explain how these factors might influence the future of your hometown.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements in fluency could be achieved by avoiding unnecessary phrases like "I think" and using more sophisticated linking words to connect ideas. The timeframe is a little unclear; specifying the timeframe for the changes would improve coherence.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. More precise vocabulary could be used to describe the changes and their impact. Instead of 'good entertainment,' specifying the types of entertainment would enhance the response. Using 'attend' instead of 'go' is a small but impactful improvement in word choice.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The phrase "finished to build" is grammatically incorrect; it should be "finished building." More complex grammatical structures could be incorporated to improve the overall score. Using a wider range of tenses would also be beneficial.