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Band 6+: How do you think your school could be improved? Why/Why not

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There are various ways to improve a school's memorandum or decorum. If teachers are trained well over time, their evaluations will improve their behavior and teaching style in every school. I think teachers must receive training from the school or the proper authority and must be observed in their teaching style in the classroom. By doing this, there will be proper classes and a proper way for teachers to teach in every school.

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There are various ways to improve a school memorandum or decorum. If teachers are trained well after certain times, so their evaluation will improve their behavior and their teaching style in every schools. I think teachers must provide training from the school or by the proper authority and must observe their teaching style in the classes. By doing this way, there will be proper classes and there will be proper way that teachers can teach at every schools.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

teachers: 3

their: 3

school: 3

proper: 3

there: 2

improve: 2

teaching: 2

style: 2

every: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear suggestion for improvement. Elaboration on the benefits of teacher training or alternative areas for improvement could further enhance the answer.

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The word 'decorum' is slightly misused in this context. To improve, try to use more precise and varied vocabulary related to education and school improvement. For example, instead of 'proper,' use more descriptive words like 'effective,' 'structured,' or 'well-organized.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'If teachers are trained well after certain times, so their evaluation will improve their behavior' is grammatically awkward. The phrase 'By doing this way' is also incorrect; it should be 'By doing this.' To improve, focus on using correct sentence structures and verb tenses. Practice speaking about familiar topics to build confidence and accuracy.

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