Band 6+: How does globalization affect cultural diversity in different societies?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from a more comprehensive exploration of the topic. Consider providing a broader range of examples and discussing both positive and negative impacts of globalization on cultural diversity to demonstrate a more nuanced understanding. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is generally coherent, but could benefit from more complex connectors to enhance the flow of ideas. Consider using phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' to build upon your points.

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise. Instead of 'have a heard time,' using 'have difficulty' or 'struggle' would be more accurate. Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to globalization and cultural diversity.

The grammar is mostly accurate. The only error is 'have a heard time' which should be 'have a hard time'. Focus on maintaining accuracy while attempting more complex sentence structures.