Band 7+: how does having many friends influence a childs sicial skills

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant points. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the mechanisms through which these social skills are developed and providing a wider range of examples. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'for instance' and 'however' (corrected to 'also') helps to connect ideas. To improve, ensure a smoother flow by avoiding abrupt transitions between sentences. Consider adding more specific examples or elaborations to support your points.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'positive effects,' 'boost their confidence,' and 'interpersonal skills' are well-used. To enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more nuanced vocabulary related to social development and peer interaction.

The grammar is mostly accurate. The correction of 'encourage other difficult situations' to 'encourage each other in difficult situations' improves the grammatical correctness. Continue to focus on using a variety of sentence structures to demonstrate grammatical range.