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Band 6+: How does obesity affect social life

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I think it's more crucial than we ever imagined regarding the lives of obese people. They have a mindset that they differ from others, which leads to lower self-esteem and makes them feel inferior during social interactions, especially in public areas such as malls, supermarkets, and parks. When they feel unsafe in public, it fosters their stress and exacerbates it. The effects of stress worsen their condition, and it is possible that this can lead to serious diseases.

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I think it’s more crucial than we ever imagined about the life of the obesity people. They have mindset that they differ with other people and it leads to make their infertile lower self-esteem and make them feel inferior when they face the social interaction especially when they are in the public area such as mall, supermarket and park. So when they feeling not safe in the public area it fostering their stress and stress more. The effect of stress is more worsen for their weak and it is possible leading to crucial disease.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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public: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a reasonable explanation of how obesity can affect social life. However, the response could benefit from more specific examples and a broader exploration of social impacts beyond self-esteem and stress. Consider discussing the potential impact on relationships, employment, or participation in social activities.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly awkward phrasing ("stress and stress more"), but the ideas are presented logically. Improving the flow and reducing minor repetitions would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "crucial," "inferior," and "exacerbates" show a good range. However, more precise vocabulary could be used in places. For example, instead of 'crucial disease,' a more specific term would be beneficial. Using synonyms to avoid repetition would also improve lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The sentence structure is sometimes clumsy. For example, "it's more crucial than we ever imagined about the life of the obesity people" is grammatically incorrect. Improving sentence structure and correcting minor grammatical errors would significantly improve the score. While the range of grammatical structures is present, accuracy needs improvement.

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