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Band 7+: How does someone become a celebrity

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I would say most people who become celebrities do so through their talents, like being good at singing, dancing, drawing, or acting. They become celebrities by expressing their talents. But nowadays, celebrity is an infamous term because there are TikTokers who do nothing, do weird things online, and suddenly become celebrities.

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I would say most people who became celebrities just by their talents, like some good at singing, some good at dancing, drawing or acting, so they became celebrities by expressing their talents. But nowadays, celebrity is an infamous term because they are TikTokers who basically do nothing, they do weird things online and they suddenly become a celebrity.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

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celebrities: 3

their: 2

talents: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant and covers the main aspects of the question. Consider expanding on the different pathways to fame, perhaps mentioning the roles of media, public relations, and even chance encounters. A more nuanced discussion of the complexities of modern celebrity culture would further strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-organized and coherent. There is a slight stumble in the first sentence, but overall the ideas flow smoothly. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow, such as 'however' or 'in contrast,' to connect the two parts of your response more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of 'infamous' is slightly inaccurate in this context; perhaps 'controversial' or 'dubious' would be more precise. Consider using more nuanced vocabulary to describe the actions of TikTokers, avoiding the somewhat vague 'weird things'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor inconsistencies. The sentence structure is generally sound. Improving the precision of the verb tenses would enhance the grammatical accuracy. For example, instead of 'they are TikTokers who basically do nothing,' consider 'They are TikTokers who essentially do nothing,' or 'Many TikTokers achieve fame without demonstrable talent.'

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