Band 6+: How does technology affect our lives?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from more detailed explanations and examples to support the points made. Consider elaborating on the specific ways technology has changed our thinking, purpose, and dependence, as well as providing concrete examples. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is generally coherent, but could benefit from more complex connectors to link ideas more smoothly. For example, adding phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' could enhance the flow.

The vocabulary is adequate but somewhat basic. To improve, try incorporating more specific and varied vocabulary related to the impact of technology. For example, instead of 'easier,' you could use 'more efficient' or 'streamlined.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. For example, 'in many things' could be improved to 'for many things.' Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures to express more complex ideas.